Monday, 25 March 2019

there go the year 6s

there go the year 6's gone to camp. I was staying in rm 1 with the other year 5's. we had such a great time. heres a slide of what we did.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Tillie, I cant get this to work.... have you done the work?

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  3. Halo Tille,
    I really like how you have added detail to your writing. I really liked doing that task it took a long time but was worth it. You added lots of information and I like your font it was easy to read. Next time double check it there were a few mistakes and do the background next time related to drawing and the picture.

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  4. Hi Tillie
    I liked how you used lots of information.Did you know that me and mum walk on the beach and pick up rubbish every Saturday.How much rubbish did you pick up?

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